tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2264781365049767919.post2251312831629310476..comments2023-07-03T02:24:47.161-07:00Comments on Orishas: Dancing an ArtGeoff Pinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08170711400027910927noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2264781365049767919.post-17167866847504431072009-06-22T16:30:22.276-07:002009-06-22T16:30:22.276-07:00parade was actually √+parade was actually √+Doctoradancerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03433902623339159966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2264781365049767919.post-28556142728778967492009-06-22T16:28:53.480-07:002009-06-22T16:28:53.480-07:00I am very glad that you made the effort and discov...I am very glad that you made the effort and discovered a new passion! When I started college, I did not dance. One day I went to a special cultural event and there was a student company that performed African dance. I was so shocked at how happy it made me just to watch, I went to their try-outs the following week. And now, I am a dance teacher! I don't know if it will work out that way for you, but dancing is an art and a passion, never stop doing it, even when it gets difficult to walk, dance in your heart.<br />You made great points about improving the work that you guys made (even though it was already greatly improved): specifying a storyline, for this type of dance, always helps, even if you decide not to "act it out."<br />Your writing is very clear and your voice is strong, just take the time to read all your work out loud to catch wrong, missing, and truncated words.<br />parade:√++<br />write-up: √+Doctoradancerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03433902623339159966noreply@blogger.com