tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2264781365049767919.post544389202499168336..comments2023-07-03T02:24:47.161-07:00Comments on Orishas: Geoff Pinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08170711400027910927noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2264781365049767919.post-77757041524193810452009-06-21T21:55:24.660-07:002009-06-21T21:55:24.660-07:00Yesenia, there was such a marked improvement iny o...Yesenia, there was such a marked improvement iny oru groups final presentation vs. the dress, that I was relived. Glad you put int he hard work. I am sorry that I did not get to see all of your hard work! it would've helped to see the extra footwork and hear the chants.<br /><br />Now on to writing; you have to work on homophones. A lot of your errors are simply because the word sounded like the one you were looking for, though it was not. This is a tough habit to break, because you simply need to know how to spell the words since English is full of irregularly spelled words. In order to avoid malapropisms in the short term, have someone else read our work before you get it to final draft.<br />parade: √+<br />write-up: √+Doctoradancerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03433902623339159966noreply@blogger.com